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About Me Member Pencil Artist Yeshiel17/Male/South Africa Recent Activity Deviant for 1 Year
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Short Story

Sat Jun 6, 2009, 11:16 AM
Down under water I'm pale blue.
Deep down the chlorine smells like you.
Was it me that held too tight?
Was it you that was too weak?
I will leave you where you lay,
While you slip and slide away... (Almost) Kent - Things she said.

Just wrote my first proper short story - just editing now.
Hopefully it's decent :)

  • Mood: Neutral
  • Listening to: Kent - Isola
  • Reading: Nothing, sadly
  • Watching: Garden State
  • Playing: Nil
  • Eating: Pizza
  • Drinking: Coffee

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  • Current Residence: South Africa
  • Interests: books, music, games, everything.
  • Favourite movie: Sublime, The Jane Austen Book Club (dont laugh. please.),
  • Favourite band or musician: MJK
  • Favourite genre of music: Rock, classical, instrumental
  • Favourite artist: Tool
  • Favourite poet or writer: Gregory David Roberts, David Gemmell, W.B. Yeats
  • Favourite photographer: M. Hattam, but i dunno where she's gone...
  • Favourite style of art: Minimalist, emotive,
  • Operating System: windows xp
  • MP3 player of choice: iPod.
  • Shell of choice: a teenage mutant ninja one...
  • Wallpaper of choice: something amazing.
  • Skin of choice: i live in the new south africa, so i cant answer this.... :D
  • Favourite game: Mount and Blade
  • Favourite gaming platform: Xbox360
  • Favourite cartoon character: i dont watch cartoons
  • Personal Quote: If you don't like it let it go, to hell with the consequences.
  • Tools of the Trade: a pencil/pen, my hands, and my pc

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Thank You fro the fave on THe Run <3

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thanks for the recent addtion. got to make that money ya'll dolla dolla bill ya'll
*slaps self*

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I tell you such fine music awaits in the shadows of the fires of hell. -Charles Bukowski
It's Kieran :P I found my obscure old deviantArt profile. So I totally started stalking you :P
Oh awesome :) i knew i recognised that sexy baritone.

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"I have died,
I will die,
It's alright,
I don't mind."
A fellow South African, and you write.
This I have to watch. lol.

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Like the wind, your voice always carries a different song. Maybe one day...just maybe...you'll sing mine.
Gee thanks buddy :) right back at you.

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"I have died,
I will die,
It's alright,
I don't mind."
You're welcome, and thank you :)

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Like the wind, your voice always carries a different song. Maybe one day...just maybe...you'll sing mine.
a pleasure :)

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"I have died,
I will die,
It's alright,
I don't mind."
yoh, thanks for the :+fav:

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Hiding from the gallows
I walk with shadows

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